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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Sta.sh
that man literally hold up Apple and the entire dream!
yes he did. Dunno if therell ever be anyone who can do what he did with apple so i wanted to make a strong image. i just wish i could have finished the idea instead of sketchin sumthin out real quick ya know.
thx man
I'd recommend offsetting the apple a bit, making it tilt in one direction to show its weight off. Maybe even have Jobs leaning forward more a bit to show the strain.
I thought the color scheme you chose for it however was pretty interesting. Maybe reduce the line noise, e.g., the complication of all the shading and sketches along his body, on Jobs and focus on accentuating his facial expression?
Rock on,
J-Patt
now that u mention it, it does look a bit stagnant. offsetting the both of them would help. as an animator i should know these things off rip lol
yea in my head i thought the focus would b on jobs like i intended, but i SEVERELY underestimated the size of the apple logo. so i shifted gears and went old school - since the logo took up more space i was gonna make it sumthin cool to look at and brightened the heck out of it with colors. that wasnt in the plan to start. then i was really mad when i realized i couldnt get detail on jobs - human antaomy is the bomb to me so doing distance characters isnt fun. i could have fixed that with a worms eye 3 qtr view, but then i'd loose the apple logo. so i settled.
thats y i said i wasnt too proud of this one but the idea is still there, still cool. i wish i can spend more time on it but chances are i wont. thanks again man gor realz